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Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless…

You’ve been hurt before I know,
You tell and act like you’re okay,
It’s so easy to laugh when you’re heartless,
But I know you’re not, so

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
Do you feel the pain?

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
Are you afraid?

I don’t know if it’s torment I feel,
Or if the pain hasn’t gone away,
But you’re an emotional mess,
How many hearts have you killed?

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
Are you ashamed?

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
What price have you paid?

Now you have mine (my soul, my glory),
Will you kill mine too?
Did our nights mean nothing?
Or am I your dirty story?

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
I am your lover.

Lady Loveless,
Lady Loveless,
But do you remember love?

Lady Loveless, (I love you)
Lady Loveless, (Do you love me too?)

Lady Loveless, (You don’t remember love)
Lady Loveless, (Though I tried to teach you)

When you can’t love,
Are you worth loving?

This is a love note to the dearly departed,
My lost Lady Loveless.
©2007-2009 ~A-Beasts-Lust
:icona-beasts-lust:

Author's Comments

This is inspired by one of my friends on Gaia, I'm confused as to her...well...everything.

But I'm so willing to poetically blame it on her broken heart.

It might not be so, but it seems that way.

No I don't love her, but I was writing from the point of view of one of her lovers (if she has any at the moment.)

Lady Loveless
Lady Loveless
Will you love me as I you?

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:icontakkun92:
brilliant
simply amazing

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Living life one day at a time...
:icona-beasts-lust:
Thanks, nice to know someone's still reading here.

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Yours Truly,

Mister Manic.:halfliquid:
:iconpixiebutt14:
I don't know quite what to say about that. It's amazing it just kinda left me speechless
:iconcelebsilmasilnoear:
Wow. Nice wording. I wonder if there is a beat to it...
Was this for a past lover of yours or just a friend?
:icona-beasts-lust:
Just a friend, I liked her a lot and I got to hear of her love life, so I was inspired to write it, and there is a beat to it, you just gotta put an off tempo solo in there somewhere.

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Yours Truly,

Mister Manic.:halfliquid:
:iconcelebsilmasilnoear:
You should write music to it, or have someone play something on a guitar or drum and sing it. Then post it on youtube and get famous.
:icona-beasts-lust:
If I could play the guitar well I would, but maybe I could figure something out, or just submit it to someone who does these things.

Is it wrong to want to get famous off the internet? CAuse the most famous things I know on the internet are infamous.

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Yours Truly,

Mister Manic.:halfliquid:
:iconcelebsilmasilnoear:
Practice, practice, practice.

As for the famous being infamous- you already are.

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